Nowadays many people read the news online instead of reading newspapers or watching TV. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
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, because they deliver news
faster across a variety of convenient platforms, even for free and in many different languages, therefore
they could have access to the events in all world instantaneously in their cellphones. Besides
, the public can choose the fields and topics they are interested in, such
as sports, politics, economics, sociality and more. Additionally
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websites like BBC or CNN, which provide recent success to the public.
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fake news
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to reach the attention of the public and generate more ranking, publicity or views. Another aspect to consider is the alarming increase of people
who are losing their jobs in the traditional media
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decade, have closed many local newspapers in Antofagasta, leaving hundreds of workers unemployed, especially old people
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In conclusion, there is no doubt that reading news
online or watching shows has some advantages as well as disadvantages. On the positive side, people
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...