These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom reaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

From the past couple of
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the way of providing education at
higher
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level has changed dramatically. Nowadays numerous university courses are being taught to
students
with the help of digital methods.As per my ,
perception
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there are more disadvantages than
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advantages to
learn
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through virtual mode. With the advancement of technology,In today's fast-moving world it has become more convenient for
students
to complete their higher education through the internet. By
studing
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studying
online, One can save
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vital time to execute their other priority works.
Besides
, the online
study
eventually proved to be more economic as the learner can manage to save money they are supposed to spend on transportation to reach their respective destination.
Moreover
, As the different type of infections has threatened the gathering of human beings it is much safer to
study
at their homes. To contradict the above statements, Some segment of society has the perception that offline
study
has proved to be more effective not only in professional life but
also
in the personal
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of
students
.
Furthermore
,
Study
has shown that learners who
attends
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their
study
courses at university campus are more confident and have better communication skills.
Moreover
, traditional teaching at colleges and universities help their
students
to manage
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strong interpersonal relationship which
mean
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they can able to help others in a better way. In
this
way of teaching,
Students
not become
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are not become
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only good professionals but
they
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become
also
a good social human beings
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. To conclude, the traditional method of teaching should have opted which eventually has more social and personal benefits. To build a better society higher level of education should be taught by universities at their respective campuses.
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