Many people believe that car is the best to travel n a city while others believe that bicycle is better.

Some

society

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societies

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claim

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claims

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that a machine is the best to tour a city while others believe that velocipede is suitable. Both vehicles have

a beneficial sides

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a beneficial side

beneficial sides

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for navigation.

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this

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modernized ,century everybody drives

a

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an

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automobile or use public transport but to decrease using to bike.Some

community

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communities

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prefer to trek

on

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in

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a

car

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due to it

is

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being

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so comfortable and useful

for instance

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fast service,give

an

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and

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entertaining time throughout listening to music,dancing inside the

car

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. It is appropriate to our century to travel a

car

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.On the other ,hand it has disadvantages for our health,

air-condition

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air-conditioning

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,maybe become accidents the whole excursion. As a ,result it causes obesity and overweight,

this

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is a global problem among countries.

Secondly

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, some

community

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communities

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consider that bike is

more

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apply

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better and useful rather than

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car

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a car

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because there are a lot of causes for choosing

this

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vehicle to tour

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for

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,for

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example,beneficial for our health,without payment for fuel and

also

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any kind of problems. It is beneficial that

our

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we

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breathe to prevent obesity.On sunny days it is so preferable and useful for entertainment ,especially among young society. In conclusion,I prefer to travel by

a

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apply

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bicycle because it is convenient and suitable.I long to trek by

a

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apply

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bicycle with my friends.