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Would you rather visit the moon or the sun? What would you do there?

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If you ask me where I would go to, the
moon
 or the
sun
, I would say that I prefer to tour on the
moon
 as the
moon
 can be realistic for
people
 who dream to travel on the
moon
. There are many reasons that I choose the
moon
 and dream to do a lot of activities. When
people
 look up to the
moon
 from the earth's surface,
There
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there
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 is
such
 a bright and beautiful circle in the sky and the
moon
 is not the same every day. I would argue that I have a dream to travel out of the world with my family,
such
 as the
moon
. I need to find a tour to travel on the
moon
 for a week and do a lot of activities.
For instance
, cooking moji like a
moon
 rabbit, eating space food dinner together with my family, jumping on the
moon
 with less gravity than the earth, and living like a spaceman.
On the other hand
, the only planet that NASA and scientists can not find other details about is the
sun
, as the
sun
 has a high temperature and is too bright for
people
 to live in. In fact, many scientists are finding out the way to research more information from the
sun
due to
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 the
sun
 is the beginning of the living things.
Although
 It is impossible to tour out of space now, it could be argued that scientists will produce new technology for many
people
 to have an opportunity to visit the
moon
.
Moreover
,
people
 would enjoy the time in space to do a lot of activities and live like a spaceman.
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