Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Few individuals claimed that

money

is

a

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best present to give

for

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adolescents. Whereas, others think opposite that

money

can affect their

teenagers

.

However

, in my opinion, I completely disagree

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the

first

given statement, and there are some views that are discussed in the below paragraphs.

To begin

with, according to my opinion, parents should not be lenient in terms of giving

money

. One of the main

reason

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is, it might be chances that their

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children's

children

childrens

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children

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use currency in

bad

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a bad

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way.

For example

, if

teenagers

have

money

in their pocket

then

they may be

using

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in

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apply

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toxic materials like drugs and other additive products which is very harmful

for

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their future life.

In other words

,

recent

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survey in the USA was claimed that many youngsters become easily

addictive

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to harmful tablets because of

money

by giving their guardians.

Therefore

they become less ambitious in their life and educational field which they have to

focussed

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on that time. To continue with,

money

is not useful for

teenagers

at that age limit. One of the main

issue

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is,

money

should affect their mental ability and behaviour.

For instance

, many parents nowadays become strictly

to

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their

child

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children

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and

not

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do not

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giving

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money

for their needs,

as a result

, they become very aggressive in behaviour and it could have been

effect

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in their thinking ability.

Moreover

, nowadays, Many

adolescence

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are buying

unnecessary

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an unnecessary

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product

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products

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like mobile phones to show off in their friend circle.

Thus

, guardians should teach them about the value of

money

and about how to earn and spend in

proper

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a proper

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way. To conclude,

money

is not a gift for

teenagers

if

their

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they're

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not

matured

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enough.

However

, in my opinion, parents should

keeping

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an eye on their

child

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children

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after giving the

money

for their needs.