Some people feel that entertainers (eg film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should behighly paid?
The criticism that models and other players in the creative industry earn
exhorbitant
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exorbitant
fee
is quite understandableFix the agreement mistake
fees
,
when one considers the prevailing economic difficulties in the country. Remove the comma
apply
However
, I disagree with the view that these people's compensation is too much for two reasons; singers usually work as a team and endorsements often come in ones
in a while. Correct your spelling
once
Finally
, I would suggest that physicians should be highly rewarded for their skills too.
To begin
with, it takes teamwork for performers to release an album suitable for the market. Indeed, it requires a lot of skillful
hands to put together a piece. These professionals usually work synergistically for a successful outing. Change the spelling
skilful
Consequently
, every one
involved in the production process will be settled from Replace the word
everyone
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whatever
what ever
lump sum the lead singer got. Ultimately, what the public sees as a huge benefit is shared Correct your spelling
whatever
to
many beneficiaries. Change preposition
with
For example
, a music legend will have to pay the vocalist, director and sound engineer from
what he got after each invitation.
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for
Furthermore
, some sporting events like the olympic
games are seasonal. Implying Change the capitalization
Olympic
sports-men
have to wait for years to participate. Considering that some of these people, don't draw monthly salary like public servants, it could be said that the huge pay-checks that Correct your spelling
sportsmen
comes
their way Add the preposition
tocomes
ones
in a while can be likened to Correct your spelling
once
an accumulated savings
. Correct the article-noun agreement
accumulated savings
an accumulated saving
For example
, the Australian open is usually hosted after every two years, meaning tennis stars like Serena Williams will make good money only during this
tournament.
In conclusion, the showbiz world is very lucrative with many industry players making huge money that is
usually shared to
members of the team, Change preposition
with
hence
I disagree with any moves to question it. Ultimately, in considering pay rise to other professionals, I will pick medical doctors as worthy of better
salary because they sacrificed a lot of time and resources to train through medical school.Correct article usage
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