You were hurt in a minor accident in a supermarket and you wish to make a complaint. Write a ltter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: - give details about who you are - give details about the accident - suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to an accident that occurred in your supermarket
last
Thursday afternoon.
My name is Tom Hanks, and I am a 22-year-old man from Ireland. I have been living in Manchester for the last
2 years, and I am studying for a master's degree at the University of Manchester. I am a regular customer, and I visit your shop on a daily basis.
I was walking in the frozen food section, and suddenly a piece of glass fell out of one of the display cabinets. It caught me on the arm before smashing on the ground. I suffered a large gash on my forearm and had to be taken to a hospital to receive stitches.
I recommend that all of your glass displays are tested thoroughly in order to prevent such
an incident from occurring in the future. I would also
like to suggest that you install signs warning people of the dangers of tampering with the glass in any way.
Yours faithfully,
Tom HanksSubmitted by suriansy on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite