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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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It is always argued that some
people
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 believe that we should accept a bad
situation
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 even if we don'
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 like it while others think it is better to
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 the
situation
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 and improve it. In fact, in my point of view,
people
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 should try their best to improve or
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bad
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situation
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To begin
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 with, some
people
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 believe sometimes we can not
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 our occasion or bad
situation
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. They
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 think it is easier for
people
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 to accept every unsatisfied field or subject because we don'
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 have that much power to
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 them.
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, if we are working in a job which we don'
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 like or we don'
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 pay as much as we should, because of life and money needs we can not
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 the
situation
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 to make it better.
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, so many
people
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 think it is better to try and improve our occasion which we are suffering from it. Undeniably, we have the chance of living once so we should try our best to make our pleasure. Whenever we are in a bad or unlikely
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 w don'
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 need to afford it.
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, if you are living in a house which you don'
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 like , you can search for a better place even in other parts of the city or if you don'
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 have money to
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 your living place you can use bank loans.
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, you shouldn'
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 force yourself to live with limitations. If you are unsatisfied with your job or payments try to talk with your boss or look for a new job. Sometimes,
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, it is necessary to improve your skills to
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 everything to a satisfactory level. In conclusion,
people
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 should not pass their only one chance life with the unlikely
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. They should try hard and
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 everything which hurts them.
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