Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
Many
people
prefer to continue doing things
which
are typical.Other Correct pronoun usage
that
people
keen on trying to modern things
,for instance
,travel somewhere for learning culture and entertaining
.
Replace the word
entertainment
Firstly
,some people
prefer to
Change preposition
apply
simplicity
because they use Replace the word
simply
to
Change preposition
apply
daily
Add an article
a daily
habit
, Fix the agreement mistake
habits
for instance
, they have peaceful
family, health and Correct article usage
a peaceful
also
enough salary. They don't need anything else, they prefer to continue in this
way. As a
result
they don't have Add a comma
,result
different
Change the article
a different
kind
of problems, Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
for instance
, if they have a lot of money,they will be lose
Wrong verb form
lost
it
by crime.If creative Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
keep doing familiar things
, our future will be mournful so they need to utilize their natural ability.
I think,if people
do things
that belong to them,their ability to think is diminished.They lag behind the times.Moreover
,they do not visit other countries,they can not know their lifestyle and national meals.For example
,all people
long to visit modern cities and also
travelling
there even to reside.They must strive to achieve their dreams.Nowadays, all Wrong verb form
travel
people
are moving to modern life,life forces them to do so.Every human does not want to be left behind. As a result
, they are aware of any news,for example
, food from different countries and unusual places they do not know.
In conclusion, both sides are right because it depends on character
and Correct article usage
the character
willing
of the Replace the word
willingness
people
.I think the more people
try to do new things
, they create a modern life and a texnology
themselves.Correct your spelling
technology
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