Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Many
people
prefer to continue doing
things
which
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that
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are typical.Other
people
keen on trying to modern
things
,
for instance
,travel somewhere for learning culture and
entertaining
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.
Firstly
,some
people
prefer
to
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apply
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simplicity
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simply
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because they use
to
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apply
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daily
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a daily
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habit
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habits
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,
for instance
, they have
peaceful
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a peaceful
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family, health and
also
enough salary. They don't need anything else, they prefer to continue in
this
way.
As a
result
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,result
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they don't have
different
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a different
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kind
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kinds
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of problems,
for instance
, if they have a lot of money,they will be
lose
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lost
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it
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apply
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by crime.If creative
people
keep doing familiar
things
, our future will be mournful so they need to utilize their natural ability. I think,if
people
do
things
that belong to them,their ability to think is diminished.They lag behind the times.
Moreover
,they do not visit other countries,they can not know their lifestyle and national meals.
For example
,all
people
long to visit modern cities and
also
travelling
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travel
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there even to reside.They must strive to achieve their dreams.Nowadays, all
people
are moving to modern life,life forces them to do so.Every human does not want to be left behind.
As a result
, they are aware of any news,
for example
, food from different countries and unusual places they do not know. In conclusion, both sides are right because it depends on
character
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the character
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and
willing
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willingness
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of the
people
.I think the more
people
try to do new
things
, they create a modern life and a
texnology
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technology
themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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