Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a debate
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about either
either
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whether
school
or the
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whether the
high salary
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high-salary
career
is by applying for a job
right after graduation. I personally believe that people should hold a degree to work
in a good career
.
On one hand, studying in
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at
the
university gives Correct article usage
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students
a degree to help them ensure a position in their career
and as much they improve their level they will be updated to the next position besides
, some high paid jobs required
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require
such
as engineering and nursing. In addition
, almost every major in university have
vocational subjects in the syllabus, Correct subject-verb agreement
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therefore
, students
will be enriched with the experience
they need to become professional in their work
. For example
, nursing students
have training hours that they should do to graduate and work
. So studying in college surely will guarantee an excellent career
.
On the other hand
, choosing the
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a
job
by applying for it after finishing high school
can also
ensure a job
but, not as good as the college students
will have due to
the differences between their knowledge since the high school
students
will gain experience
without expending their knowledge. This
will make their work
improvement slow and they will spend their lives in the same position. In other words
, gaining only experience
will affect the work
development negatively.
To sum up
, to ensure a good job
people should have a balance between the
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the
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experience
and not by
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start
school
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