The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and theyshouldn’t waste their limited resources and space on providingexpensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos andDVDs.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Public

libraries

have a huge responsibility to maintain the collections as

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a book

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books

rather than

plug in

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all the advanced levels of technology devices or software. Many believe

information

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the information

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can only find from the internet but the library is the only proof that

books

are giving more adventure experience than

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e-book can give. I totally agree that

libraries

should give the

first

priority to store the

books

but not just collecting hardware like computers,

tvs

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TVs

and big projectors. To make sure the atmosphere of the study place remains calm and less noise pollution,

that

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every Liberians should be aware of the items that going to belong inside the reading place does not make any disturbance or diversion to the readers. Reading

books

is one of the good exercises for the brain and it is scientifically proved that's looking at the hard copy of a book can give a more good impact to the brain and inner

piece

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peace

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, the current society is immersed in technology everywhere they see, coming to a library is to see the collection that they couldn't find from another e-book. Something like

local

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a local

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book

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books

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or inside town magazines can only be found at

that local area

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that local area library

those local area libraries

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libraries

but not from the internet. At the

last

, people coming to the library by seeking

for

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calmness and a for to get the environment vibes to kick start their days sometimes. It is many peoples hobbies to visit

libraries

and to spend some quality time, ruining it will very developed technology will only divert the readers.

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The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and theyshouldn’t waste their limited resources and space on providingexpensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos andDVDs.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

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