Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens have a healthier diet. Others, however, believe that individuals should take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As the pressure of working or studying is heavier, more and more

people

get sick due to the unhealthy

diet

.

Therefore

,

people

argue

that

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whether

government

need to play a role in helping residents have a healthier

diet

or citizens need to take care

themselves

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of themselves

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for their own

diet

.

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essay will discuss

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issue from both sides. Some may propose that

government

is important to do more to help residents have a healthier

diet

. One possible reason is

government

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the government

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has the bigger authority to carry out some compulsory regulations.

For instance

,

government

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the government

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can stipulate all schools to provide

the

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healthy

diet

for students. The diets need to include the most important nutrition

such

as

vitamin

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vitamins

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,

carbohydrate

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carbohydrates

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and protein every school day. Another reason is that

government

can help citizens have

easier

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an easier

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way to access

the

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healthy

diet

.

For example

,

government

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the government

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can make sure the low prices for healthy

food

such

as vegetables, fruits, eggs and various kinds of meat by the policy like maximum prices. In

this

way,

people

have more chances to enjoy

the

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healthy

diet

with the help of

government

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the government

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.

However

, other

people

argue that

individuals

need to take their own accountability for their

diet

. One of

reasons

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the reasons

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is only

individuals

can supervise themselves.

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Individuals

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Individual

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An individual

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are more familiar

their

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health conditions and know which types of

food

can eat or whether they are allergic to some

food

.

Therefore

, they can eat some healthy

food

which is suitable for them. Another reason is

individuals

are the

first

person to worry about their health

problem

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problems

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and they

also

should be the

first

person to make sure they

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to

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healthier

food

. In my opinion, I suppose

individuals

need to take more responsibility for their own

diet

compared with

government

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the government

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.

This

is because governments try to improve the health condition

from

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whole

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the whole

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society. It is impossible

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for that

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that

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government

can look after every single person.

Thus

,

individuals

have more feasibility to achieve

the

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healthy

diet

as they only need to take care

themselves

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of themselves

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.