Today family members eat fewer meals together. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

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the present age,
members
have not
participant
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normally in family
meals
.
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in the
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whether it is a blessing or a curse has sparked a heated debate. On the one hand, young adults,
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like
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adolescences
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do not commonly
shown
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up in family
lunch
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or
dinner
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due to the development of technology in our modern generation. Since the technology is so advanced in social media which created a wide range of opportunities to get access numerous
of
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restaurant
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online, teenagers or young people want to experience more about the quality and service in these eating places.
Furthermore
, restaurants will
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the most undeniable dishes with amazing photos, affordable prices and lots of
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for young adults. In fact, the adolescence who
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hours
in
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social media like Facebook, Instagram, Twitter might not be avoidable by these marketing and willing to try
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these eating places. The evidence has reasoned that eating out could be the
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for young people to widen their knowledge about culinary and cuisine of other countries and places.
On the other hand
, there
are
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huge
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number of families who
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grown up adults using their
time
to build their career and make money in other cities or continents might do not
having
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enough
time
to gather together.
Moreover
, these families would not mind spending more
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in order to have
a
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meals
together at special holidays like new year’s eve or
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.
Besides
, in order to bonding and
solving
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conflicts between family
members
in
meals
, everyone will feel peaceful and enjoyed the most precious
time
together. The accumulated basis demonstrate
for
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the
valuable
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of eating
meals
with other family
members
.
In
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this
age, dine-out or dine-in can
bringing
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enormous meaning and
feeling
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for each family
members
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. It depends on the prominent of the
time
we
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with the purpose which can help the family link
more
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stronger or to widen the knowledge about
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cuisine and culinary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • communication
  • bonding
  • interaction
  • quality time
  • technology-free
  • busy schedules
  • work commitments
  • nurturing relationships
  • sharing experiences
  • community spirit
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