Many young people move out of their homes to live alone or to live with their friends. Some people think this is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In

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modern scenario,many individuals tend to move out of their families to reside solitary in order to search

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occupation or for

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better education,so some

people

ruminate that

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it is the best decision.I strongly accord with

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statement.

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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,the main reason why the public is migrating from one place to another location is the lack of amenities,

people

can find them in metropolitan areas.

For instance

,many multitudes who are inhabiting in rural areas where

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of provisions in terms of education and job opportunities,so many youngsters switching to urban areas for their career.

Moreover

,the main benefit is

people

can communicate with different masses.

Consequently

,they will be able to commute

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places without a language barrier. On another hand,students should not concentrate on their future when they are habituated to living near the family because parents should not allow them to work hard consistently as well as disturbances can

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when they are engaging in their projects.

for example

,it is undeniable that

people

have to involve in

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household chores and sometimes cousins may be influenced their brains in terms of setup parties at the weekends.

This

is

also

one of the reasons to live far away from their parents.

Although

it is

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to stay away from family,it should be

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for gaining knowledge.One disadvantage of

this

phenomenon is

people

may have missed affection which is very important to everyone. To conclude,even though

people

do not like to go

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places where they have to live alone or to live with friends,they should live solitary as it facilitates many benefits in terms of education,occupation and knowledge,so I agree with

this

statement.