Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public healthand that other measure are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Our wellbeing and

health

is an urgent

matter

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that should be taken care of, consciously. There are measures that can be forced by the government to boost the public

health

of all their citizen altogether. Adding more facilities is a solution,

however

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there are other

measure

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that

need

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to be done simultaneously.

First

of all, installing new and technologically advanced

sport

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facilities might help.

This

is the simplest way to provide more

opportunity

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and access to

people

. More stadiums, jogging tracks, and gyms that are accessible for everyone will certainly serve as alternatives to working out at home.

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addition to that, these places will work as an external factor to push

people

, knowing that there are no excuses anymore as all are provided without us having to spend a big budget. Other measures are needed,

however

, as building those extra public places can only help to an extent.

Health

and

sport

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ministry or related institutions need to campaign the benefit of working out as well, telling the success stories of

people

that managed to improve their quality of life through being active. They can

also

work together with private gyms and sport-person or athletes for

this

matter. Social media is a powerful tool to advertise something and

people

tend to follow some key opinion leaders that they trust anyway. My take on

this

issue is all these measures are to be done at the same time. We need to create a society or an ecosystem where sports are encouraged and provide a safe space to do so. More

sport

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complex and lifestyle campaigns are key factors to bring

the

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public

health

to a better state.