The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The given bar and line graphs demonstrate

the

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information about the number of tourists from Japan who travelled abroad and tourist market shares of Australia

in

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the age of 10 years.

Overall

, it can be seen from the bar chart, that number of travellers

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increased throughout the date. Moving to the line graph, we can see

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rose with a slight decrease in the middle of the period

According to

the bar chart, there was a sharp increase between 1985 and 1890, beginning from 4

mln

up to 11

mln

.

Then

, it showed a small decrease

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some

thousands

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in the following year. The whole rest of

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it rose noticeably up to 15

mln

and it was the highest point over the years It is noticeable from the line graph, that shares of Japan's tourist market grew gradually from 2

mln

to 5

mln

between 1985 to 1989. The

next

year it saw a small drop to 4

mln

.

Moreover

the all remaining stage it continued to rise by just several thousand and reached the highest point of just under 6

mln

in 1994. ,

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at the end

of the

,

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period

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trend fell slightly and remain with 6

mln

market shares