Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Ikram Lach and I am a freshly graduated nurse. I am writing to let you know that yesterday I saw your advertisement in Ladies Magazine and I am interested to work with you the

summer.

Firstly

, I have worked with foreign individuals before whether young or elderly people and I was doing plentiful tasks for them

such

as groceries, cleaning, carrying for children.

As a

result

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this

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experiences made me more flexible.

Secondly

, working with you will help me a lot to improve my English since I am looking forward to pursuing my master's degree in Canada.

In addition

, I am a quite social person and I am into building relationships with people around the globe and

also

discovering new cultures.

Finally

, I will be available all week except Wednesday because I have to attend my painting course

besides

I am waiting to hear from you Yours faithfully, Ikram

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