The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two maps below display the centre of a small
town
called Islip, the upper one shows the present version of the
town
and the other one shows the plans for its development. In general, the
town
has been fully renovated. First, they planned to build a road around the
town
.
Second
, they planned to add some more public facilities
such
as a bus station, parking places and a sidewalk which is designed for pedestrians only. As we can see from the present map, there is no path connecting either the Northside or the Southside of the
town
, it has been planned to establish a dual carriageway in the shape of a circle to surround the whole Islip
town
.
Moreover
, there are two rows of shops which the one close to the Northside of the
town
has been planned to replace as a shopping centre. They
also
planned to improve the public facilities near
around
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the area,
for example
,
bus
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a bus
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stop, car park and a sidewalk which is designed for only pedestrians between two rows of
the
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shops.
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