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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #attention
In most
countries
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 we may have different opinions on the level of marriage or decline. The standard of living in rural areas is different from the standard of living in cities because both please differ in lifestyle and living environment. The reason it benefits the countrysides is that the living conditions and lifestyle of the
people
 there are
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.As the standard of living increases ,of course, the number of
people
 in the city increases and the number of
people
 in the
countryised
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countryside
 decreases. The downside is that the more
people
 there are the
less
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 living conditions there are ,and the
less
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 resources there are the poorer the city becomes. To
overcoming
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 them should improve rural livelihoods and for
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 the government should pay attention to and develop. In conclusion, we can say that living standards of the population and develop rural habitat.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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