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Some people think that children should be taken in control by their parents while others argue that they need to learn to be independent. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

#people #children #control #parents
The bar chart illustrates the percentage from the survey of
coffee
 and tea purchasing and consumption behaviour in the
last
 4 weeks of
people
 from 5 main
cities
 of Australia. As an overview, the most significant noticeable is the highest number of
people
 hanging out to have some caffeine drinks,
such
 as
coffee
 and tea at cafes from
people
 in almost
cities
 in Australia except
Adelaide
 had a slight percentage of
people
 who preferred to buy instant
coffee
 and enjoyed making by themselves at their own place. Regarding purchasing of fresh
coffee
, Sydney was shown the data around 43%, while Melbournian had a small difference at 42%, Followed by Hobart was approximately 38%. Looking to Brisbane the number accounted less than the early
cities
 mentioned at 35% which was a similar level to
Adelaide
.
Furthermore
, there was a significant data of buying instant
coffee
 provided under 55% among 5
cities
, Sydney (46%), Melbourne (47%),
Adelaide
 (50%), Brisbane (53%), Hobart (54%).
Lastly
, the activity to hang out at the local cafe showed a considerable number of more than 60% from 3
cities
 which
was
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were
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 Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney, at 63%, 62% and 61% respectively. Meanwhile, Brisbane was at 55% and the least percentage was from
Adelaide
 which only 50%.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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