it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend to you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is important for kids to learn the difference of

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what

is right and wrong at

young

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age

. Sometimes

punishment

helps to learn the

diference

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difference

.

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essay totally agrees with

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statement because if

children

do not differentiate what is acceptable or what is unacceptable, they might have social issues later as adults;

however

, parents and teachers should not give physical

punishment

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they can private from toys or activities they like. It is important to teach

children

to accept

punishment

to help them to follow social and family

rules

because they need to

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accommodate

to society in

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nearly future. Those who are not able to differentiate right from wrong might have

also

issues with the law as

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because they were not thought to accept

rules

at

early

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age

.

For example

, The University of Texas states that most of the male

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prisoners

presented bad behaviour when they were at

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age

.

As a result

, the statistics proved that people who do not adopt

rules

and norms at

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age

, later in life presented higher percentages to be sent to jail. The type of

punishment

that tutors and educators should apply to their

child

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is to remove

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such

as watching television or going to recess. It is important to let them know when they did wrong because

this

means an

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opportunity

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them to learn a lesson that later in life might help them to remember what feels

not

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to follow

rules

.

For example

, In the USA, California, it is forbidden to apply corporal

punishment

when a

child

behaves in a bad manner;

however

, the

child

is sent to talk with the psychologist to let the

child

think

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about what

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he did wrong.

As a result

, most of the

children

feel

embarrased

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embarrassed

if they are seen to go to the psychologist's office. To conclude, it is necessary for

children

to understand what is right or wrong to let them learn at

early

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age

the importance of

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the

rules

in life and society;

however

, physical

punishment

is

unaceptable

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unacceptable

for

children

to avoid mental damage. After all,

children

are the future of the world and we should guide them to live in better conditions.