Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues.

In many countries, some people claim that the
Olympic
games
combine different nationalities together whereas some believe that holding the
Olympic
games
wastes quantities of money. Personally, both sides have their own opinions and I agree with the latter argument that
this
is merely wasting of funds. On the one hand, for some individuals, Holding the
Olympic
games
combine the same interested individuals from various countries and bring peace to among nations in the world.
Furthermore
,
this
situation has been believed to not only allow participants and athletics from other nations to communicate but
also
exchange their notions with each other,
as a result
, people gain an understanding of traditions and attitudes.
For instance
, gathering all athletes together in an enormous hall in order to have dinner together, successfully increased the relationship in the
Olympic
games
in various lands. Regarding some communities who considered the affairs as wasting funds, There are several crucial reasons for
this
phenomenon, which the suffering from primary demand, which consists of food, security and accommodations in poverty countries.
Consequently
, Authorities threatens populations by investing a bunch of money in those events in order to participate in communities and strengthen the relationships with other nations.
For example
, In the BBC news, some poverty counties spent 50% of their income on affairs, leading to suffering from hunger, which is the primary demand, and poor facilities and increasing taxes in order to increase the country's incomes. In conclusion, while the
Olympic
games
are prone to provide peace and fringe benefits to many people, others believe that investing in primary demand is more crucial
instead
of wasting funds on those events.
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