IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of purposes that several travellers want to go to Brighton, England for 30 years after 1980.

Overall

, it can be seen that there was a downward trend with the exception of the pier and festival. The art gallery and pavilion experienced the same trend, these

initially

started with 22% and 23%.

Although

these rose significantly in half of the given period, there was a dramatic decline in both categories. Especially, art

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saw a significant decrease since 1995

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and dropped to just over 8% in 2010. Turning to the remaining categories, the festival slightly dropped since the beginning of the period and remained almost the same percentage until 2010 at about 28%. Meanwhile, there was a steady fluctuation in the pier until 2000;

then

,

this

had a rapid growth until 2010 to just over 20%.