IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of purposes that several travellers want to go to Brighton, England for 30 years after 1980.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was a downward trend with the exception of the pier and festival.
The art gallery and pavilion experienced the same trend, these initially
started with 22% and 23%.
Although
these rose significantly in half of the given period, there was a dramatic decline in both categories. Especially, art gallery
saw a significant decrease since 1995Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
,
and dropped to just over 8% in 2010.
Turning to the remaining categories, the festival slightly dropped since the beginning of the period and remained almost the same percentage until 2010 at about 28%. Meanwhile, there was a steady fluctuation in the pier until 2000; Remove the comma
apply
then
, this
had a rapid growth until 2010 to just over 20%.Submitted by jirawat.sea on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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