In the last decade, there has been an increase in the number of varieties of online courses available to adults. While welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other student see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?
It is argued that there is an expansion in the varieties of
electronic based
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electronic-based
education
accessible to pupils. It is flexible in nature and brings education
right to your home are the main advantages, whereas it makes easier
to procrastinate and leads to more screen- Correct pronoun usage
it easier
time
are
the main disadvantages.
Web-based Change the verb form
is
education
provides more time
to learn certain skills which gives a boost to every student’s career. Also
, children can mold
their online Change the spelling
mould
course
schedule according to their daily regime. For example
, disciples will be able to study at their own time
and still can give time
to their loved ones and work full time
while getting education
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an education
Moreover
, E- book based course
can be studied by anyone, from anywhere. There is no limitation of courses as well age limit to Fix the agreement mistake
courses
acquire
internet-based Change the verb form
acquiring
course
. For example
, even housewives can take web courses from their comfort of home without any time
limitation and at their own pace.
Online courses have many drawbacks as well. In addition
, electronic based
learning led to Add a hyphen
electronic-based
procrastinate
during studies because no force for completing Replace the word
procrastination
course
on Add an article
a course
the course
time
make students lazy to finish their course
, so they keep on delaying through which they can’t learn new skills. Although
, on
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on-screen
screen
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,screen
education
causes health issues specially
on eyesight. Replace the word
especially
For example
, according to the
recent survey, many doctors reported that most of their patients suffer from weak eyesight.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
a
flaw
of studying online makes individuals procrastinator and cause some health-related issues outweighs some benefits of flexibility and bringing studies Add an article
the flaw
a flaw
at
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to
comfort
of your home from Add an article
the comfort
internet-based
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...