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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Change
 has always been an important part of
nature
 or we can say that
change
 is a rule of
nature
, without
change
nature
 cannot survive. So, I am a firm believer that
change
 is always a great thing. But on the other ,hand we all know that everything has its own pros and cons.
Furthermore
, when thinking it from an individual's perspective who avoids
change
, a person for whom the concept of
change
 is bad, that person believes that uniformity is the key to one's
life
 and changing those small or large things is going to disrupt his/her
life
 in unimaginable ways.
For example
, I had a friend who used to curse if there was any kind of
change
 in his
life
 because for him it was bad he needed uniformity in his
life
.
Moreover
, when we talk about the other side of the coin we can see in
nature
 how
change
 has been a constant part of it, even the basic processes of
nature
 include different stages of
change
.
For example
, water which is scientifically known as hydrogen peroxide has 3 different stages or we can say that water
changes
 its forms in 3 different stages which include vapour, liquid and ice.
Also
 when we talk about an individual's personality those too
changes
 with time as people behave differently under different circumstances. So in conclusion, we can say that
changes
 have always been a part of the
life
 of any individual, some prefer to live their lives doing exactly the same thing while others tend to
change
 things as they move forward with their
life
. And I believe that
change
 is always a good thing as it helps to adjust with the ever-changing entity which is time as time
changes
 and it
also
 doesn't stop for anyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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