Some people say that school leavers should start working immediately. Others say that they should continue their studies at university. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays a lot of people think that after

the

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school, the students should find a job whereas others give importance to

study

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at the

University

. In my opinion, I think that they should go to

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University

due the following reasons.

First

of all, I think that

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students should go to

the

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university

because it gives them enough

knowledge

and in consequence, opportunities to find a better job.

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, people with

Bachelor

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or

Master

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degree

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receive a higher income than those school leavers. The salaries related to the medical area are increasing over the years and more specifically in the

last

two years.

Secondly

, the students who decided

go

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to

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university

, acquire critical thinking apart from the

knowledge

related to their

studies

.

For instance

, a recent survey made by The Guardian

demonstrate

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that citizens who have finished their

university

studies

were more able to contrast information between two different sources.

On the other hand

, I can understand that the economic situation inside the family could lead them to the job market as soon as they finished

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they

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school,

for example

in single-parent families. There are countryside areas in which the major part of their citizens starts working when they were quite young. The consequences are not only in relationship with

studies

and

knowledge

but

also

they show several health issues. In my opinion,

university

studies

gives

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to

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the population not only the opportunity to grow up in different areas but

also

provides them

enough

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knowledge

to develop their career overall.