the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada between 2009 and 2019.

The given pie charts illustrate the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada between 2009 and 2019. It is clear that there was a change in the device used to watch
TV
for Canadian
teenagers
from 2009 to 2019, While most
teenagers
used conventional
TV
as the main device in 2009, a clear majority used the mobile phone as the primary device ten years later. Looking at the
first
main feature,in 2009 only 8% of teens watch
TV
by mobile phone, but
this
figure rose dramatically to 27% in 2019.
Furthermore
, while only 5% of teens used tablets in 2009, almost two times as many
teenagers
used
this
gadget ten years later.
Similarly
, the number of using flat-screen
TV
steady increase to 26% over the period. With regard to other main features, the proportion of teens who used conventional
TV
fell considerably from 34% in 2009 to only 4%.
Likewise
, the proportion of using laptops dropped from20% to 12% over the ten-year period.
Finally
, a fall in the number of desktop computers used in 2019 reflects the fact that more
teenagers
used mobile phones in that year.
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