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In some countries, some criminal trials in law courts are shown on television so that the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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widely
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 use of television in most countries, the authorities tend to broadcast the scenes or videos of criminal
trial
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trials
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 through the public media to prevent
crime
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 it has some benefits, the disadvantages should not be ignored. Live criminal
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trails
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 can be seen as a great way to deter
crime
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.The most obvious is that if
people
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 watched the
trail
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 videos, they might have a strong impression about the harsh punishment for criminal activities and try to perform as a model citizen.
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, it allows the public to improve the awareness of
law
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 and acquire the knowledge of procedures of
trails
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 offers
people
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 a way to gain information about protecting themselves and how to address the issues while they suffer from a
crime
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, when the
footages
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 are shown on TV, there are
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 some drawbacks.
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, live
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trails
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trials
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 may not be suitable for some
people
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, especially for teenagers, who might be easily influenced by the
midea
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media
 and copy what they see on Television.
In addition
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, the
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trails
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trials
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 shown on television may cause secondary harm for
people
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 or their
family
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families
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 who suffered from a
crime
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, because in most situations, they try to avoid being mentioned by others.
The most
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 important,showing
footages
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 of
criminal
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the criminal
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trail
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trial
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 is not the best option to address the root cause of
crime
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 and reform criminals.Government should concentrate on the problems like poverty, discrimination, inequality and etc. In conclusion, I agree with the view that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
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