Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
The issue
whether
working for a successful Change preposition
of whether
business
is brought more benefits
than working for a developing company
. From my personal point
of view, I think every option used to have pros and cons that I will base my opinion Change preposition
on in
in
the following Change preposition
on
point
.
On the one
hand
, having a job
in large
Correct article usage
a large
business
also
has several advantages
. Firstly
, a huge corporation will provide to their staff a professional work environment
; in addition
to one
has better medical insurance and high
salary. Correct article usage
a high
Moreover
, cooperating with other companies
that
mean many potential clients to make employees feel more secure about their careers. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Besides
, it is more likely to exist various drawbacks, for example
, large businesses generally demand intense knowledge
and experiences to ensure that their workforce could be coped with the heavy workload, usually intricate many pressures. Furthermore
, competitive
Correct article usage
a competitive
environment
could be led to dead-end jobs and mitigate opportunities to
promotion.
Change preposition
for
On the other
hand
, working in small
Add an article
the small
a small
company
also
has benefits
. First
of all, less competition in job
used to have more good relationships with their co-workers. Also
, it is more appropriate to
non-experience Change preposition
for
staffs
and helps them to gain more Fix the agreement mistake
staff
knowledge
about how a company
works. Another aspect has more chance to promotion
and employers are Replace the word
promote
also
gained feedbacks from their boss to improve their deficiencies and get better recommendations. In contrast
, it still has several disadvantages, for instance
, those who has
a low income Change the verb form
have
has
to make ends meet, and cannot guarantee their standard of life or worse medical benefit.
To conclude, I think everyone can choose every single Change the verb form
have
job
if they passionate
about it. Those who want to follow a high Add a missing verb
are passionate
environment
and competing
with their colleague, so huge firms are good options. Wrong verb form
compete
Otherwise
, developing companies
also
plenty
of Add a missing verb
have plenty
advantages
too.of whether working for a successful business
is brought more benefits
than working for a developing company
. From my personal point
of view, I think every option used to have pros and cons that I will base my opinion Change preposition
on in
in
the following Change preposition
on
point
.
On the one
hand
, having a job
in a large business
also
has several advantages
. Firstly
, a huge corporation will provide to their staff a professional work environment
; in addition
to one
has better medical insurance and a high salary. Moreover
, cooperating with other companies
mean many potential clients to make employees feel more secure about their careers. Besides
, it is more likely to exist various drawbacks, for example
, large businesses generally demand intense knowledge
and experiences to ensure that their workforce could be coped with the heavy workload, usually intricate many pressures. Furthermore
, a competitive environment
could be led to dead-end jobs and mitigate opportunities for promotion.
On the other
hand
, working in the
small Correct article usage
a
company
also
has benefits
. First
of all, less competition in job
used to have more good relationships with their co-workers. Also
, it is more appropriate to
non-experience staff and helps them to gain more Change preposition
for
knowledge
about how a company
works. Another aspect has more chance to promote and employers are
Change the verb form
have also gained
also
gained feedbacks from their boss to improve their deficiencies and get better recommendations. In contrast
, it still has several disadvantages, for instance
, those who have a low income have to make ends meet, and cannot guarantee their standard of life or worse medical benefit.
To conclude, I think everyone can choose every single job
if they are passionate about it. Those who want to follow a high environment
and compete with their colleague, so huge firms are good options. Otherwise
, developing companies
also
have plenty of advantages
too.Submitted by bachbeodo on
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