Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

When it comes to an important thing in a country
besides
the economy there is
also
a good education. I think schools should not give too many exercises to
students
and while teaching should let
students
participate in other
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activities. Because doing so will help
students
find the lesson more interesting and easier to
undertand
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understand
. Assigning homework to
students
is a good thing but should not be too many, especially difficult
one
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because doing so will make
students
feel stressed and tired. Family in VietNam are very focused on their
children
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grades, which is
also
an indirect part of their
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pressure and depression while studying.
In addition
to studying, things related to the
house
are
also
very important.
For example
, cleaning the
house
if we don't clean the
house
, our
house
is very dirty. Everyone wants to live in a clean. We can see that cleaning is
also
very important, it will affect how we
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when we come home after a long tiring day. In short, apart from the economy of a country. All other things are equally important so we should not distinguish one job in life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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