Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagrees with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Most of our friends tend to have their own opinion about everything. While a stratum of society believe that it is beneficial to give preference to the folks who usually have
same
perspective as themselves, I would strongly argue that friends who occasionally disagree with you can provide a diverse point of view and broaden your horizons.
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, those who believe that choosing like-minded companions is advantageous might argue that it is good for maintaning
harmony in the relationship. Correct your spelling
maintaining
This
is because no dispute is caused due to the difference of opinions, which in turn would lead to having no quarrels between companions. To illustrate, my friend Shubham usually tends to agree with my decisions and due to this
we rarely have any arguments which keeps
our relationship intact.
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keep
On the other hand
, I firmly believe that contrsuctive
criticism is necessary for growth and success in Correct your spelling
constructive
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the long-term
long-term
. The reason for Correct your spelling
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this
is this
enables us to view any particular situation from a new perespective
and find new solutions. Correct your spelling
perspective
For instance
, my friend Gautam believes in out of the box thinking, which provides meAdd the preposition
with a
a
multiple ideas to solve the same problem. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
In contrast
, if I did not have diverse friends, I would not be able to broaden my horizons.
In conclusion, although
it is easier to maintain a stronger connection with like-minded individuals but
it can hardly be denied that Remove the conjunction
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contrsuctive
criticism is vital to long-term success as Correct your spelling
constructive
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encourages us to search for new ideas and solutions.Submitted by anirudhgaurag on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite