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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss bpth these views and give your own opinion.

#people #situation #job #shortage #money #situations #bpth
PEOPLE ARE WILLING TO BE HAPPY IN THEIR
LIFE
. IT IS PROPOSED TO ACCEPT THE CURRENT SITUATION WHETHER IS SATISFACTORY OR NOT IS THE BEST WAY FOR
THIS
 AIM. ALTERNATIVELY, MAKING AN EFFORT TO CHANGE CIRCUMSTANCES IS RECOMMENDED, TOO.
THIS
 ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH THESE
ARGUES
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 AND EXPLAIN WHY TRYING TO
IMPROVING
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IMPROVE
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 CONDITIONS IS BETTER THAN THE
FIRST
 ONE.
FIRSTLY
, ALL OF THE HUMAN BEINGS WANT TO FEEL FULFILMENT
OF
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IN
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 THEIR
LIFE
.
IN ADDITION
 TO THE FACT THAT SATISFACTION IN WORK AND
PAID
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BEING PAID
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 WELL ARE AT MASLOW’S HIERARCHIAL NEEDS’
FIRST
 STEP, DOING NOTHING TO IMPROVE THESE SITUATION MEANS GOING BACK IN
LIFE
 WHICH EVENTUALLY BECOMES MEANINGLESS. LACK OF THESE
SORT
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 OF CRUCIAL NEEDS RENDERS
IMPOSSIBLE
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IT IMPOSSIBLE
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 TO FIND HAPPINESS AND
THIS
 PROCESS EVENTUALLY ENDS WITH DEPRESSION AND
MAY BE
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 TO HARM YOURSELF.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, MAKING AN EFFORT TO OVERCOME THE OBSTACLES MAY IMPROVE THE QUALITY OF
LIFE
, WHETHER THE CASES MAY BE CHANGED OR NOT. ATTEMPTING TO CHANGE ON PHYSICAL
ENVIRONMENT
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,
SUCH
 AS WORK, MAY GIVE A MEANING
ABOUT
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LIFE
 AND POSSIBLY HELP TO ACHIEVE THE LEVEL WHICH THE PERSON DESERVES. PERSONALLY, MY EXPERIENCE MAY PROVE
THIS
 FACT.
LAST
 YEAR, I SUDDENLY
FELT
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IN
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INTO
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 A TRAP BECAUSE OF MY WORK AND QUIT MY JOB, WITHOUT A DOUBT. IN SPITE OF HAVING SOME TROUBLES, I WAS CALLED FOR A BETTER JOB IN A SHORT TIME. IN CONCLUSION, ALL WE ARE LOOKING FOR
THE
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IS THE
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 SAME FEELING, AND IT’S CALLED FULFILMENT. THE FACT IS THAT NOTHING CAN CHANGE SPONTANEOUSLY,
THEREFORE
 PEOPLE HAVE TO TAKE ACTION ABOUT THEIR
LIFE
.
OTHERWISE
, DEPRESSION IS INEVITABLE. IN MY OPINION, EVERYONE HAS TO BE AN LEAD ACTOR IN THEIR
LIFE
 NOT AN AUDIENCE.
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