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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: -describe the item you lost -explain how you lost it -tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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The supplied charts give information about the types of America's bank complaints as well as the date
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 spent to resolve these problems appointed. Overall, It's clearly evident that the huge source of reclamations is from detection data to take a resolution action stayed between 4 and 6
months
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 during the analyzed period.
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 chart provides us with the segments which present complaints about the treasury. The major one was from the public, at 63%.
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, there were three areas that showed similar percentages of appointments: Government agencies, out of state and insurance companies, with 11%, 10% and 8% respectively.
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, fund employees and media users
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 reclaim bank services
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 their numbers were almost insignificant as well as
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 sources, which demonstrated only 3% and 2%, respectively. Meanwhile, the average period to answer these issues, unfortunately, didn't show a huge change. In 2000, America's fund spent little less than 6
months
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 to understand and present a solution for their users.
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 amount slightly increase in 2001.
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, the time rapidly decreased in 2002 to 5
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, approximately, and
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, it steadily remained until 2004, when the average demonstrated the lowest amount of time at 4
months
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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