You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while your are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this fiend. In your letter: -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

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Dear Manish, I am writing
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letter to you to inform you that I am coming to Canada
next
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week for my
further
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study. I hope you will be
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glad
when you tolisten it because we are going to meet each other after two years. I recently completed my graduation in the commerce stream and now I took admitted to Lambton College of Canada as a student of Business Management course which is
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diploma. My college sends me
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e-mail that I am eligible to work part-time during my study which is a great option that I can manage my all expenses there by myself. In
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matter, I need your help. Can you please help me to find a part-time
job
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because I am new in Canada and I do not know anything about it
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You are there for a long time and you are familiar with everything. I think it will be easy for you to find a
job
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for me. I am not very demanding as you know. Any
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which you find for me will be good for me now. We will see later if I want to change it. I hope you understand and spend some time for me to find a
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. with regards, Ramesh
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