Scientists and tourists travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

For many years now,

expeditioners

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expeditions

and holidaymakers have been visiting some unique ecosystems

such

as the South

Pole

for research and fun.

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essay will explain the risk of death associated with these visits as a major downside and the knowledge gained, as the main importance of

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to the Poles. It will conclude that the merit of

such

journey

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far outweighs the demerit.

To begin

with, when vacationers move to a unique enclave like the South

Pole

, they expose themselves to a lot of dangerous animals.

For instance

, Polar bears are very bad animals that can eat up humans,

consequently

, adventurers will risk

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their lives during a vacation. Indeed,

this

can be very traumatic.

Moreover

, the extreme climatic condition of

this

region can make youngsters

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fall

siick

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stick

.

For example

, the North

Pole

is known to be a very cold place,

thus

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could suffer from frostbite or even freeze to

dead

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if they are not protected.

On the other hand

, the ecological diversity of the polar region provides a good opportunity for scientific research.

This

is important because people desire to know,

for instance

, how the plants in these places survive the harsh weather conditions. Ultimately, these scientific findings can be used to solve

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problem

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.

For example

, how do some crops become fertile and produce fruits despite growing under the cover of snow all year round? The answer to

this

kind of research question could help mankind to develop agricultural schemes that ensure food security for the populace. In conclusion, touring the South

Pole

for fun or for academics can be risky.

However

, the wealth of information that can be gathered from

such

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can be quite helpful to humanity.

Thus

the merit of visiting the polar region far outweighs the demerit.