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Some people say the cars should be banned from the centers of cities. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some
people
 argue that the
city
centres
 should become out of private vehicles. Personally, I partially agree with
this
 idea that banning cars from particular areas in the
city
 is all advantageous. On the one hand, keeping autos out of the
centres
 of cities is likely to reduce traffic congestion.
Moreover
, a
fewer
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 number of vehicles would equal less air and noise pollution which may affect citizens' health.
For example
,
people
 would be much happier on holidays even if they stay in the
city
 because the majority would travel which means no traffic and no pollution. It
also
 may decrease the number of accidents. Many office buildings are located in the
city
centre
 which results in many
people
 in rush to go to work that may cause accidents in consequence.
On the other hand
, if all cars were banned from the
centres
 of cities, there would be problems in some situations.
For instance
, in the case of an accident or illness,
people
 would face difficulties
to reach
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to
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a hospital,
which
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most of
them
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which
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 are located in the
city
centre
. There are
also
people
 with disabilities that need to commute in their car,
otherwise
, they should stay home or pay someone to take them to work or other places in the
centre
.
In addition
, the population who cannot afford to live in the
city
 may face difficulties without their car or an adequate public transportation system.
Therefore
, I believe there should be ways to come to the
centre
 by
vehicles
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vehicle
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such
 as taxes or limitations
to
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on
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 the number of entrances. In conclusion, the issue of the existence of cars in the
centres
 of cities has become controversial.
While
 I agree that driving in these areas may be dangerous, I think there should be some exceptions for emergency situations.
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