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the number of research students studying six various subjects in 2015.

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The given bar chart illustrates the
number
 of research
students
 studying six various subjects in 2015. Overall,it is clear that there was the same
number
 of boys and girls studying in natural sciences and more the men
students
 course in all subjects than the women student except the linguistics. According to the chart,The majority amount of men studies psychology,natural sciences and mathematics,with about 200
people
.
This
number
 was the same level of the women who study in natural sciences,which was the subject that has the highest amount of women’s study.
Furthermore
, the corresponding figure for women's courses in psychology and mathematics were approximately 180
people
 and only 48
people
 respectively.
Moreover
,while there were 150
people
 of men
students
 studying engineering and programming, the
number
 of girls studying those subjects was almost 100
persons
 and around 70
persons
.
On the other hand
, around over 100
persons
 of the girl
students
 course linguistics,higher than that of the boys,with only around 90
persons
.
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