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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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Some people argue University
students
 must be encouraged to
study
 of their inherent
interest
, while others say
students
 must be advised to go for
science
 and IT sectors because they are the most sought after
subjects
. I believe,
one
 can greatly progress when
subject
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 matter is of own's
interest
 whereas going with
science
 and IT could be tough for those
students
 who don't like these
subjects
 and could lead to
study
 breaks. On
one
 hand, University
students
 are already aware of their subject likings and dislike and following it they can achieve their goal. Preferred
subjects
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one
 to learn, research, and expand the vision more.
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, Asmita Adhikari, who was a nurse by profession has left her carrier for singing, now she is the
top
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most
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singer
of
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 Nepal.
Therefore
,
i
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 believe only
an
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interest
 from a heart in any
choosen
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chosen
subjects
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 can drive a person in a crazy way, making them successful in their life.
On the other hand
, the
subjects
 which are proposed and advised to
study
 like
science
 and technology, the
students
 have been seen to have not much of
interest
 in learning
thus
 they just make a
mediocore
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mediocre
 individual on their
subjects
 and hardly do a better carrier
thoigh
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though
 they may be earning some more money but always a
non entity
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amongest
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amongst
 their friends. So
i
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 believe
this
 can cause difficulty for those who don't have
interest
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an interest
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 in
science
 and tech, compelling them for giving up in
study
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. In conclusion, studying
one
's favourite subject always brings greater successful output
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where as
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, choosing proposed
subjects
 of
science
 and technology can cause trouble for the
one
 with lack of
interest
 in it.
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