Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

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Some people argue University
students
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must be encouraged to
study
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of their inherent
interest
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, while others say
students
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must be advised to go for
science
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and IT sectors because they are the most sought after
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. I believe,
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can greatly progress when
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matter is of own's
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whereas going with
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and IT could be tough for those
students
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who don't like these
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and could lead to
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breaks. On
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hand, University
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are already aware of their subject likings and dislike and following it they can achieve their goal. Preferred
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one
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to learn, research, and expand the vision more.
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, Asmita Adhikari, who was a nurse by profession has left her carrier for singing, now she is the
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Nepal.
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,
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believe only
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interest
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from a heart in any
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can drive a person in a crazy way, making them successful in their life.
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, the
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which are proposed and advised to
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like
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and technology, the
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have been seen to have not much of
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in learning
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they just make a
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mediocre
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and hardly do a better carrier
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though
they may be earning some more money but always a
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amongest
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amongst
their friends. So
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believe
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can cause difficulty for those who don't have
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interest
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in
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and tech, compelling them for giving up in
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study
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. In conclusion, studying
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's favourite subject always brings greater successful output
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whereas
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where as
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, choosing proposed
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of
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and technology can cause trouble for the
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with lack of
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in it.
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