Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

Although

the

internet

is beneficial to humanity, in some

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it might be the opposite. It is argued that pupils have become more dependent on the

internet

, and that dependence could have many drawbacks;

therefore

, some individuals have suggested that the

internet

should be restricted.

This

essay examines

this

argument, and why I believe that

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affect

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pupils negatively. There are various reasons why I believe that

students

should not be allowed to

use

internet

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during school time.

To begin

with, many educators agree that young adults get

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distracted

easily

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class. In fact, there is a study that deduced

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the fact that

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students

lose their attention after 25 minutes from the beginning of the class.

Thus

, allowing them to

use

internet

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could reduce that attention span

drasticlly

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drastically

. Another

disattraction

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distraction

that might arise is that minors could play

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game

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, open their social media account, and browse porn.

As a result

,

this

could affect their grades and

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understanding

. The

second

reason why I think that educational establishments must not allow pupils to

use

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is

because

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this

might affect them mentally. Many neuroscientists believe that when a student is using their research skills,

this

might strengthen the neurons in their brain. Namely, when a student gets the information with one click, eventually,

this

might affect badly.

Furthermore

, research skills

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a

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vital

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during university. Many postgraduate programs require

students

to have research skills, so

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having it

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students

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might increase their chances to get

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admission. In conclusion, even though

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internet

might enrich the educational experience, there is a consensus among educators that allowing

students

to

use

internet

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might affect their performance. On balance,

however

, it is my opinion that using

internet

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at school might have many consequences.