Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now.
Nowadays, the development of science and technology have impacted our
behavior
and life. Some people think that there is no better time to be alive than now. Change the spelling
behaviour
However
,I disagree with this
opinion. Because,
we do not know their benefits or disadvantages in the future.
The progress in the area of communication and mechanics has been so large and Remove the comma
apply
this
situation has been barrier
Add an article
a barrier
for
our lifestyle. Change preposition
to
For instance
, we do not imagine anyone without a mobile phone. This
change makes us live in a more virtual world. Individuals prefer to replace live communication with messaging and emotions with smilies. I think in this
case people move away from each other.
Agrarian products use artificial enhancers for the needs of growing
population. Add an article
a growing
the growing
Although
these products give results, they also
have a bad impact on human health. For this
reason
people become more stressed.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the fact there is no better time to be alive than now . I feel that previous generations enjoyed life more.Add a comma
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