You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, • state your reason for writing • describe the problems and explain how you feel • propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with
this
current situation in my apartment. I have been a loyal tenant for more than four years and
this
problem never happened before.
Besides
that, I always paid my rent
with
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some days in advance and for
this
reason, I believe that I deserve
a
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better treatment.
First
and foremost, my mates and I are without hot water and heating for almost three weeks and I am strongly concerned about
this
situation
,
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since the winter is coming. I tried to contact you the
last
week,
however
, you were
traveling
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. So I had an opportunity to talk to your wife and she told me that some workers would fix the problem yesterday, notwithstanding, the problem was not fixed yet. I suffer from
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chronic backache and just the warm environment helps me to solve my current health disorder. Please, let me know how much longer I will have to wait for an efficient solution. Should you have any questions, I can be contacted every day after 5 pm. I suggest that you replace the heating and tackle the situation related to hot water immediately,
otherwise
, I will find somewhere else to live. I look forward to your reply Thank you in advance for your attention Yours faithfully, Larissa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to bring to your attention...
  • I wish to formally complain about...
  • Despite several attempts to repair...
  • The absence of hot water and heating...
  • This ongoing issue has caused considerable inconvenience...
  • As a result, it has become increasingly difficult to...
  • I urge you to take immediate action...
  • I propose that a specialist be consulted...
  • Should this problem persist...
  • I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience...
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