Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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There are several benefits associated with providing free medical facilities to the citizens of the Linking Words
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, early identification and cure of disease would prevent the spread of diseases in society. Linking Words
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, according to an article in Times magazine, children in the slum areas of India are often ill as they are unable to afford the required medication which results in the spread of germs and infection to healthy individuals.
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, as per research by Cambridge University, two out of five cancer deaths could be avoided if the tumour was identified earlier.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite