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Nowadays many people prefer to use private cars. What problems has this trend created? What solutions can you suggest?

#people #cars #trend
Private
cars
has
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 become popular in
today
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today's
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 society, most
people
 perfect to use their own
vechile
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vehicle
 for travelling as it is
convience
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convenience
 for them.
However
,
this
 trend has a big impact
for
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on
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 the environment
such
 as air
pullution
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pollution
, and it
also
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effects
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affect
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effect
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affect
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people
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people's
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 life
such
 as wasting
time
to wait
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waiting
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 in
the
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traffic
.
Therefore
 I
thinkthe
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think the
 government should
limited
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cars
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car
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 use in some specific areas. Today, the number of private
cars
 used has
increasing
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, especially is in the city.
Therefore
this
 created two main
impacted
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for
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on
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people
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people's
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 life.
Firstly
,
cars
 have
exhause
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exhaust
 carbon dioxide to contaminate oxygen which is effect
people
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people's
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 health,
such
 as asthma and lung functions.
Secondly
, too many
cars
 on the road at the same
time
 will make
traffic
jam
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jams
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.
For instance
, in Kuala Lumpur
people
 need to travel for 2 hours
with
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within
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 50kms distance in some office building
area
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areas
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.
As a result
, to live in
capital
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 city like Kuala Lumpur
it
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apply
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is so annoying with the
traffic
 jam, and wasting
times
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time
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for
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travelling.
Thus
, my
first
 solution is the
governement
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government
 should
limited
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limit
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 private
cars
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car
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 use in urban areas to reduce
traffic
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the traffic
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 jam problem.
Also
, if the
governement
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government
 could set up some regulations in the city, it might
helps
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help
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.
For example
, In Singapore, if
who
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those who
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 want to drive
thier
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their
owe
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own
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vechile
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vehicle
in
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during
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the
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peak hours,
they
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need to pay double
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amount
ammount
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the ammount
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 of money for
the
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car
resgistration
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registration
. The
second
 solution is public transports need to be increased.
For example
,
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the Malaysia
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Malaysia
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Malaysian
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governement
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government
 should follow Singapore and Hong Kong public
tranpost
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transport
systerm
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system
, to have more trains and buses going in working days.
This
 would reduce private
cars
 used. In summary, nowadays most
people
 perfect to drives their owe
vechiles
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vehicles
 to works or shops.
However
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this
 trend bringing some
negetive
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negative
 way for
people
 life. As air pollution can
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affect
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effect
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affect
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 human health,
and
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people
 cannot effort
wasting
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waste
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 most of
the
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their
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time
to wait
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waiting
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 in
the
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apply
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traffic
.
Although
people
 perfect to drive their
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own
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owe
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own
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 car ;
however
,
this
sometime
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sometimes
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 might lead to health issues and
time
 waste in some situations.
Therefore
 I believe the government should resolve
this
 problem as soon as possible for our society.
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