A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Anna, Hi, how are you? I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am excited to hear that you are planning to go on camping

this

summer for the

first

time and am glad you reached out to me for advice. I'm sure your trip will be an amazing experience as I am aware of your love for nature and

this

sounds to be a perfect opportunity to get closer to it.

Besides

, spending your time by the lake during the day and having a campfire at night will be a great help for your stress reliever and clear your mind.

However

, there is something you should keep in your mind during your trip. You will not have access to decent internet service as you will be in nature. There will be some chance that you can use the internet, but they aren't necessarily good with speed and quality.

Additionally

, there will be countless numbers of mosquitos and bugs. I strongly suggest you bring insect repellent. I wish I could join you camping, but I'm afraid I have local volunteer work

this

summer. I hope you will enjoy your time there and have a lot of fun. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Naomi Umami

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