Task 2 Academic: Some people say that smart phones have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that smart phones have made life more complex and stressful.

Nowadays, with the development of high technologies, electronic devices become close to people and
smartphone
is one of them. With a
smartphone
, you can do anything. Because of its compact design, you can easily carry it with you. And in the age of evolving media,
smartphone
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the smartphone
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is an intermediary bridge to help you access
those website
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that website
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, connect and communicate with
the
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apply
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others, update information, remind
we
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us
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the
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schedule,
....
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It is the product of high technology, so it can be said that it
have
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made life easier and more convenient. But everything has two sides, smartphones are
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no
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not
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no
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exception
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an exception
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.
Rely
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too much on
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a smartphone
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smartphone
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can make life more complex and stressful.
Because of the
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continuous use of the phone for a long time will give you headaches and eyestrain. If you do not have a
smartphone
, you will feel uncomfortable and passive in
solve
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the problem by yourself.
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