You are planning a holiday to Australia . You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to a hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel’s facilities . Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure.

Dear Sir / Madam , I am writing to inform you that I and my sister are planning to

come

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Australia

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April.

Although

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I have got some information , I would like

further

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details.

Firstly

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, I would like to know about rooms , and could you please tell me how many days ahead do I need to make

booking

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a booking

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in advance? In fact, I know that your hotel is all the rage because of its proximity and we are coming on peak season. Personally, we would prefer to stay

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in at

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Suite Deluxe room with

twin

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bed.

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, I would like to know about all facilities you provided . Is there any garage area to park our car?

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, as we are spending our summer holidays for 2 weeks , I would be grateful if you could provide the laundry service .

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, the

last

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thing I was wondering if you arrange day trips to national

museum

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and must-see sightseeing places including tour guide services .

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, could you please provide me

the

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brochure in order to organize our

detail

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detailed

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trip plan

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Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Mee Mee

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Single idea per paragraph

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