Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
Wedding day is the most special day for both families including bride and groom. Nowadays,
people
seem to spend so much money
on marriage ceremonies
than they used to spend in the past. However
, this
is clearly a negative development as it includes wastage of money
and food on large scale. The First
and the foremost reason behind extravagant weddings
is "showoff". People
want to show others, their wealth and high standard of living.For an instance, In India, gatherings of thousands of people
at weddings
are very common and also
marriage ceremonies
are celebrated for several days in hotels. Another reason could be the parents wish to give best to their children.To show their love towards their children, they organize big and pricy weddings
. As people
waste so much money
on marriage ceremonies
, this
is obviously a negative development, and this
money
is not benefiting anyone. It has seen that tonnes of food are
Change the verb form
is
get
wasted on big Change the form of the verb
getting
weddings
. A lot of money
is spent on decorations and clothes, but most of the relatives try to find flaws rather than appreciating the concerned families. Therefore
this
money
should be utilized by donating it to charitable societies so that they can help someone who really needs it, only then
it can be called positive development. In conclusion, in this
modern world,most people
want their weddings
to be big but they are not seeing the wastage that is
being attached to them.This
is the time when educated people
should come forward and set an example by celebrating simple wedding ceremonies
of their own.Submitted by kalraharman6 on
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