You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter describe the item explain where and when you left it say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Naomi Umami. I am writing

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letter regarding the loss of my Apple Watch during my trip from the Robson station to the Evergreen Station

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Thursday, 3rd March 2022. I got on the train from the Robson station at 7:00 in the morning, and I was on the

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car on the train. I put my Apple Watch on the seat by the window in order to put some sunscreen on my arm. I completely forgot to put it back on my arm. My Apple Watch has a black surface and the colour of the band is pink. I would really appreciate it if you could check and see if there is

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an object in your Lost and Found section. Please do not hesitate to contact me for any

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information about my loss. I thank you in advance for your help and cooperation.I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Naomi Umami

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

167 words

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