Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear

Mr.

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Barrett, I am writing

this

letter in response to the newspaper advertisement that was published

last

week regarding help needed. I have been living in the Barlett

neighborhood

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for the past ten years, and many people in

this

area know me very well as I worked as a caregiver in

this

community. When it comes to the house assistance job, I can offer housekeeping work

such

as cleaning, laundry, dishwashing and light cooking.

Additionally

, I can take care of kids at home as I am experienced in a nanny job.

Furthermore

, if you are interested in hiring me, I would probably shift my home near yours so that I can save daily commutes, and if required, I can visit at odd times

such

as evening hours. About my background, I am from India, and my family members are still live in my native place. I am the only bread earner in my home, and all my earnings go to my parents' and kids' expenses. I live here in a studio apartment and am available 24/7 to help needy people.

Additionally

, I always have a strong desire to serve the community as I am a peoples person and enjoy the company of people from different cultures and backgrounds. One

last

thing is that I visit the church every Sunday and spend 2 hours serving the food for visitors.

This

is the only time when you do not find me available. Rest assured that you will not be disappointed with my work and passion. I will provide you with all my details in our meeting to perform background verification for your family security. I am looking forward to working with you, and I know you will definitely like my work. Thanks, Sita

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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therefore
however
although
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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

292 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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