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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, parents are paying more attention to
children
's education and even some people hold the view that
children
's leisure
activities
 must be educational. One of the obvious examples is that
children
 after class will be sent to various clubs, ranging from painting to music. Parents think that it is a good way to help their
children
 make full use of
time
 and their
children
 will have more opportunities to learn more skills.
For example
, if a child takes an art club, he may be better at drawing or painting and appreciating fine arts than his peers. At the same
time
, it is much easier for him to make some like-minded friends and develop his social and communication skills, which may be difficult to be fostered for a child who is just left alone at home. In spite of these benefits, I do not agree that
children
's leisure
activities
 must be associated with education and seemingly doing nothing is a waste of
time
. From my perspective, like adults, they should
also
 need some
time
 to absorb the knowledge and skills that they have acquired at school and to relax their minds and bodies. Only by
this
 method, can they get recharged and embrace a new day energetically and confidently, or they are likely to experience tiredness and sleepiness.
In addition
, we should not deny that free
activities
 in leisure
time
 benefit
children
 a lot.
For instance
, running and chasing with fellows is beneficial to body health and fitness; doing graffiti sometimes can stimulate their creativity. In conclusion, I think entertainment
activities
 are not necessary to be educational because
children
also
 need some
time
 to relax. And pure free
activities
 have important and positive effects on
children
: building up strong bodies and cultivating creativity.
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